Subject: OFF скажите, в этом предложении все в порядке с грамматикой? Rich in cultural heritage, influences come from the Austro-Hungarian, Ottoman and Italian empires and, as a result, there are many sites of archaeological interest to explore as well as a plethora of medieval buildings in the towns and cities.Вопрос как для носителей языка, так и для специалистов с хорошим языковым чутьем - здесь все в порядке с грамматикой? Меня смущает первая часть фразы:Rich in cultural heritage, influences come from the Austro-Hungarian, Ottoman and Italian empires and, as a result, there are many sites |
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link 26.10.2007 0:42 |
Все ли в порядке? Абскапутли! |
Абскапутли? Туплююю. Это как? |
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link 26.10.2007 0:46 |
Absolutely (kinda broken English :) "На что-то там внеконтекстное повлияло богатое культурное наследие австро-венгерской, оттоманской и итальянской (римской?) империй..." |
Просто мне казалось, что фраза несогласованна, потому что нет глагола. Значит, просто туплю... Спасибо. |
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link 26.10.2007 0:51 |
Подскажите герундий от ту плю? Плюинг? |
Тупинг :) |
This is a run-on sentence. It should be broken up into at least two sentences. Also, you are right: the clause "Rich in cultural heritage" is ambiguously positioned, so it is not clear what it is referring to. The way it is positioned, I would guess, it is referring to "influences." But, in my opinion, if an average reader has to do this kind of guesswork, this means that the sentence is poorly written and needs to be revised. |
ms801 thank you so much for this explanation! so i was more or less right :) |
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